My Argument

For writing we have been learning to write an argument using the writing process. The topic was “Are Devices Taking Over Our Lives”.

Something I did really well in my writing was.... the ideas i had

Here is a section of my writing that shows this.

                Devices are taking over our lives

I agree with this statement

Human race will disappear

-Soon the human race will be replaced by robots and/or technology.Cars are made of technology so if tech toke over our lives then cars mit go phyco and drive us of a cliff.The more time we spend on devices the more we will want more devices and before we know it we will be robots.

The amount of time on devices

-Kids should spend less time on devices and focus on what's important like homework.Kids spend too much time on twitter,facebook and instagram.People and kids spend so much time on tech.